Thursday, March 31, 2005

8. The Clockmaster avoids a question

Suddenly, she was startled. Past eight and the shop’s still - open? She turned back, in moment’s reflex, and looked through the shop’s glassed window, dusk creeping in darker like a veil unfolding from the east. How come it’s this late?

“What time did you say it was?”
It was still bright when I left Starbuck’s.

The shopkeeper’s face became stern, as if offended by her question. Or was it always this stern – his usual face, when no customer was looking at him? He looked at this pocket watch again, put it back, but gave no reply. Instead, he bent down and took out a drawer filled with wristwatches from beneath the counter.

“If you want Swatches, I’m afraid I don’t have them…” He was being the polite, gentle, apologetic shopkeeper once more. “Rolex, Omega, Cartier,…– that I do. Maybe – maybe a Baume & Mercier might interest you? They have this very nice collection, you see…” And stole a look at Nicole, “it’s, um, with interchangeable straps; you can put on different leather straps, if you don’t like the steel or the gold straps: they come in different colours and they do this double loop around your wrist.” He took one out from the drawer, with a deep pink, purple, strap, “see? Very nice. Very chic, madame.”

Madame and not miss? And why’s he avoiding the question? I want to know what the hell the time is! Well, no wonder, all these clocks with different times… But, eight o’clock? No way.

She was beginning to feel uneasy, as only a woman can when she finds herself alone, unaccompanied by a person she trusts, in a walled place where events start drifting from the expected usualness. An unidentifiable uneasiness, but not fear. Not quite.

9 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

did you really say "a Swatch"?
a Swatch in a NY scene?

ok, are we getting close to bagels?

i'm hungry, that's why.

April 01, 2005 12:47 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

since you will, obviously, eventually write a book, will "mora" be the author?

April 01, 2005 1:33 pm  
Blogger Shardul said...

Why's that odd to you? There's at least one Swatch shop in the Upper West Side (where Nicole has her flat) and one Swatch megastore in Times Sq. I suppose there's even more and certainly lots more Swatch retailers.

As for Mora - yes, that's the name. But I haven't decided on the first name? Any suggestions?

April 01, 2005 4:31 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

because it just doesn't fit.
a big one in Times Square, sure. exactly because it doesn't fit NY.

anyhow, Mora sounds good and sounded like a first name to me. i'm curious about the origins.
but since you need a first name sure you know what my suggestion would be. just may not be deeply serious enough. which could actually be a good thing.

i like it and i'll call you by the name i secretly suggest.
yes?

April 01, 2005 4:59 pm  
Blogger Shardul said...

Sure. Provided you don't call me Bagle Mora...

April 01, 2005 6:24 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i knew you'd guess. Bagle Mora you'll be. to me.

April 03, 2005 2:10 pm  
Blogger Shardul said...

Well, in that case, I'm pretty sure now, no bagles will appear in the novel...

April 03, 2005 4:48 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Cookie Mora doesn't sound better.

well. sad, sad when someone does not recognize the hidden power of a bagel.
there's even something sweet about a bagel. sweet.
but enough of bagels.
on with the story we go.

April 03, 2005 8:08 pm  
Blogger Shardul said...

there's no hidden power in bagels; just a hole in the middle...

April 04, 2005 8:46 am  

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